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Friday, July 2, 2021
The mighty river
In our class we are doing creative writing with pictures and we can only write it in 4 minutes and fix it up in one minute then the next day we carry on the story that we did yesterday or make a new one describing the picture.
Hi it is me mercedez and I think that your writing is very good it is very nice and I like how you said that you had a little sister and how your grandma told you the river and i like how you said to be continued I am ready for an new update from your blogging buddy mercedez
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Hi it is me mercedez and I think that your writing is very good it is very nice and I like how you said that you had a little sister and how your grandma told you the river and i like how you said to be continued I am ready for an new update from your blogging buddy mercedez
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